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This was a True story in my life, my bestfriend told me she loved me, and I was in love with her for years, and finally got to admit my love for her, it was the best feeling in the whole world.

Our Love

© Elijah Mcinnes

The first time you said "I love you",
My heart started beating like a drum,
My ears started ringing,
I can't believe what I've just heard,
What I've just witnessed,
Our love is finally showing,
This is one of those moments,
where you completely took my breathe away,
But I managed to say,
"I love you too".

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Published: 2/14/2011

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We two form a multitude

- Ovid

Love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies.

- Aristotle