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I am a soldier currently in Iraq and I wrote this poem for my gorgeous wife. It reminds me of our good times together and how I intend to be there for her always..until we both die

A Beautiful Surrender

© Miles Fredette

we're alongside the ocean, the gentle sea breeze is flowing through your hair revealing your sapphire eyes
our hands are united embraced in which feels like a lifetime of love
the sun is slowly falling, giving way for a new day
it feels as if we're being born again, given a new chance
a chance to learn of mistakes past and generate an abundance of love in which we've never felt
the sky is a gorgeous display of colors, unimaginable beauty
a ray of sun shines through a passing cloud and it finds us
you stare out into the now orange sea, the ocean is reflecting in your eyes as I bring your body closer to mine.
I feel as if there's no one else
in the universe but you and I, as all senses fail
it's as if we were meant to be here at this moment in time together
we are united by love and lust and I hope that just like the sun we will one day fall together to make way for new life and new days
a beautiful surrender


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Published: February 2011

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We two form a multitude

- Ovid

Love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies.

- Aristotle