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I wrote this poem after my first break up. This was the first teen romance I had ever had. I hold this poem very close to my heart. Writing how I felt helped me cope and helps me get through all the hard times in my life.

Quiet Love

Remember to breathe
Close your eyes
Count to ten
Please don't cry
Stop the shaking
Stop the sobbing
My thoughts slip and I think of you
I feel I might die
Calm yourself down
I exhale and fall to the ground
I let my knees buckle
I let my head spin
I let all of the pain and sorrow in
I forget to breathe
I start to cry
Then I shake
Then I sob
I can't calm down
My heart begins to throb
Please stay with me
My heart is yours
I feel the rain, it starts to poor
I cant get up, I cant go on
I'm so deep in love
My strength is gone
My words are whispers
And I am sore
I don't want my love to bother you anymore
So I take a deep breath
And count to ten
As I pray to god this pain will soon end..


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Published: November 2010

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We two form a multitude

- Ovid

Love is composed of a single soul inhabiting two bodies.

- Aristotle